People Are in Hokage, the Start Is Simplified to Eight Gates Dunjia

The writing is too long-winded, and the important plot points are all mentioned in one stroke.

The timeline is very messy, and the system is also very messy. Not long after the Fourth War started, the eunuchs

The character setting is a bit broken and the plot needs to be optimized.

Okay, no matter what, I finished reading it, but I still have to complain that it ended too suddenly.

Why did it end so hastily? The writing was obviously very good.

What kind of ending is this? Skip the entire next chapter? ! Bad review!

Many characters' personalities are a bit broken, some characters' backgrounds and stories have also been changed, and their combat power is not stable.

Even Naruto didn't understand it, and he wrote the Naruto-style novel Hyuga Neji. Xiao Li and the others are one year older than Naruto and Sasuke! Your protagonist has just graduated, Naruto and the others have also graduated, so awesome!

You will collapse instantly when you see it at the end.

It's just a bit sad to see half of it gone. It ended suddenly.