The Fiery Age: I Have a Door to Two Realms

Okay, it's pretty good, just a little messy.

The prices of various commodities are too confusing, and the timing is also confusing.

The previous article looked good, the writing was good, and it was quite reasonable. As a result, around Chapter 40, I started to lose my mind. It's a bit funny to actually play two worlds that can influence each other! It's okay for the protagonist to travel from the 1960s to 2024, but if the world in the 1960s and the world in 2024 can affect each other, there will be too many problems involved! You can take things from 2024 and go back to the 1960s. What changes is the future world after the 1960s. The 2024 of this future world and the 2024 you traveled to should be completely disjoint parallel worlds to be reasonable. Otherwise, for example, the food you brought back from 2024 saved a person who should have died in the 1960s, but you saved this person, then this person will affect countless people. If this is superimposed, the 2024 era you traveled through will collapse, and the life experiences of too many people will be changed. If you continue to play like this, you will never be able to come back. You don't need to read the ending to know that it either sucks or is completely unreasonable! Therefore, the worlds of the two timelines must not overlap, otherwise you will not be able to write well!

After reading Chapter 157, I really can't stand it anymore. The author's writing style is average and can only explain things clearly. There are a lot of poisonous points in the plot and the logic is scattered. I really can't come up with a reasonable explanation. I can only travel to modern times for a few hours every day, and I can't contact him at other times. I have to have a modern girlfriend. All kinds of weird words and deeds are extremely embarrassing. The more he writes, the more he writes. You can read it, but I won't read it.

People who spend millions and tens of millions casually are very happy to receive hundreds of thousands. Sometimes they don't care about money and spend hundreds, hundreds or tens of millions casually. Sometimes they feel that even a small amount of ten thousand or twenty thousand is a lot of money. It's really too messy78

The plot setting is good, the content and writing are average, and the mathematical calculations are poor.

If the protagonist really sold things in such a mess in the 1960s and found treasures indiscriminately, he would definitely be shot as a spy, because you can't tell the legal source of things. Do you really think that the public security organs are vegetarian? His biological father will not report him

I also read Chapter 11, it's so disgusting

↑The modern experience of feeling alone among the crowd.

You won't be able to stand it anymore after reading Chapter 11. I suggest you give up.