Xuanhuan: Fellow Daoist, Don't Go! Have a Spar with Me!

So bad, full of nonsense, it takes ten pages to write one punch, yet it still gets such a high score.

What am I writing? I was going to just quit, but I just have to get this off my chest.

The protagonist's surname and given name are mixed up in the first chapter.

The protagonist's surname is He, but his given name is wrong in the first chapter.

There's nothing interesting about mass-produced goods.

When you write a novel, every sentence is uncertain and you can't express what you want to say. When I read your novel, I also find it incomprehensible.

"Home" refers to everyone, and you keep recording it. You only type one character; can't you just say his full name? It sounds very uncomfortable, that's the way it's supposed to be. Do you think you're some kind of powerful figure who dominates the world?

The problem is that the entire article is poorly written, completely incoherent, and rambling. Writing needs to be fluent and logical. It's disjointed, with sentences jumping from one topic to another, making it feel disjointed and unconnected. Ugh.

This is the first time I've seen a book like this. I hope the author will keep writing.