I Enjoy More Children, More Blessings in Against the Gods

Elders in the Star God Realm all start as God Lords, and Star Gods all start as late-stage God Lords. Yun Che's God King Realm is comparable to a God Monarch. What can he do in the Star God Realm besides die? Also, you previously mentioned that the Brahma Emperor, Star Gods, and the Celestial God Emperor all came to the Star God Realm, but now your writing is illogical.

Have you even read your "Evil God" fanfiction carefully? You didn't even read the settings! Qianye Ying'er's aptitude is equal to or greater than Shui Meiyin's, who possesses an immaculate divine soul. Shui Meiyin is a level 7 God Lord with three thousand years of cultivation in the Heavenly Pearl, while Qianye Ying'er is a level 5 God Lord with less than a thousand years of cultivation in the…

This novel by the author is good, but it has quite a few typos.

Your novel is completely illogical, the romance is poorly written, the character development is a mess, and the frequent breaks in updates are to be expected. It's impossible to understand what this fanfiction is even trying to say.

Since you're so fond of fawning over Yun Che, why not just give the system to him directly? And with the return of the Heavenly Demon Emperor, his wrath directed at Chen Beixuan, who cultivates the power of the Heavenly Slaughtering God Emperor, you're pinning your hopes on Yun Che to plead for your life? You're a disgrace to transmigrators!

Honestly, if you obtained the spatial rules of the Chaos Demon God in the primordial world, refining even a small portion would grant you the power of a true god. Yet, Chen Beixuan cultivated in the Chaos Pearl for a thousand years, and his strength and realm are still only at the God-King level. His aptitude is practically useless.

Xia Qingyue was created by the Primordial God to protect Yun Che, and it was created by stealing 90% of Xia Yuanba's talent and fortune. Furthermore, Xia Qingyue bears the chains of fate; Yun Che receives boundless fortune, but Xia Qingyue's blood parents meet tragic ends, her siblings frequently face death, her sect is on the verge of extermination, and her children are destined to die young.

Your fanfiction about the evil god deity is vastly different from the original work in terms of character portrayal and personality. Your "many children, many blessings" fanfiction is utter nonsense. If you insist on writing fanfiction about an evil god, I suggest you carefully read the original "Against the Gods" before you start.

The funniest part is that Chen Beixuan cursed himself to help Yun Che. If he likes being a simp so much, why doesn't he just turn himself into a woman and fawn over Yun Che? Also, continuing the original plot of "The Evil God" is really ridiculous. This system-based story is completely messed up, the logic is a mess, and the character design is even more flawed than Yun Che's character design in the original "The Evil God".

Furthermore, the protective barrier of the Star God Realm is impenetrable even to other royal realms. Only those with power far exceeding this barrier can break through it. In the original story, Yun Che spent 50 years cultivating in the Abyss to fight against a true god, while you, Chen Beixuan, in your system-based novel, cultivated for a thousand years in the Chaos Pearl without any…