Help! The First Emperor Can Hear My Thoughts!

The overall plot is relatively reasonable, but recently I feel that the description is redundant and the excessive rhetoric makes the article read like a lot of words, and it is inconsistent with the overall character portrayal, just like the protagonists and Grandma Liu entered the Grand View Garden of the narrator. The narrative quality is reduced. The novel originally focuses on plot description, and the description in the last n chapters accounts for too much, which tends to dominate the novel. Overall, the impression is not good

Everyone is a time traveler

There are over 200 chapters, I think it's quite interesting.

The writing is very good, the logic is not strong, and the protagonist is not brainless. However, some people may think that the protagonist talks too much in his heart. I would like to give the author a suggestion. You can briefly summarize it. Instead of using such a formula, you can add some modern jokes. Come on, author.

In fact, the main attractions of this book are the voices of Qin Shihuang, his wife, the protagonist's mouth, the dirty things in the court, other people's imagination and the protagonist's manipulation. But now I personally feel that the new plot is a bit delayed. The Fusu disaster relief side is basically about gaining favor with Qian Feng Quji (Lao Qin Group) and waiting for Goudan to come out of Heishui Terrace and kidnap people. The author has no inspiration recently, right?

Although but I still want to say update update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update. New, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update

It's good to watch, but I hope we don't reach the finale so soon, okay?

It's wonderful, it's really wonderful. Although some parts of the voice are a little intellectually subdued, it's very comfortable to watch without thinking. There are many places that are quite funny. I hope you can pay attention to the typos.

Hahaha, beautiful. Laughing to death

Well written and quite interesting