Wake Up, Campus Beauty! My Childhood Sweetheart Is the One I Love

The first few dozen chapters were okay, but the more you read later, the worse it became. I can only say that the author's writing is not good and the story is not good either. Still have to practice

The writing was a bit watery from the beginning to the middle and late chapters, and the last few chapters were a bit too sloppy. But very beautiful

I don't care about other people's rankings, but this drama ranks first in my heart. The whole drama is neither short nor long. The whole drama is narrated around high school. Most of the text describes the interaction between the male and female protagonists. The supporting characters are very personal. The text is sprinkled with sugar from time to time, which is slightly sweet. The author's writing is very good. This drama is really worth watching for everyone. Highly recommended! I hope the author will continue to do so!

It's quite good to watch, with rich plot and clear writing, but it's a little short. I recommend everyone to watch it.

It looks good, no need to say anything else

It looks good, the characters have distinct personalities, especially Strict, who has the most obvious image. (My own opinion)

It's good to read, but I always feel that something is wrong. I feel that the IQ of this book is not online.

A relatively soothing and bland plot, it depends on personal preference. I give this book a very high rating. You can read a dozen chapters to see if it suits your taste. Okay, now that I'm done with the negatives, I want to talk about the shortcomings. First of all, the characterization is relatively shallow, staying at the level of immediate thoughts and expressions. It's just that this person's personality is not distinct enough, and may even be a bit inconsistent. It is suggested that the author can better combine the character with his experience and background in the next book. Don't act as a tool to promote the plot just because he is a supporting character, and then add the background later to promote the next plot. The supporting character is not three-dimensional enough. Secondly, the protagonist is not deep enough. The protagonist's psychology seems to be still at a relatively naive level, which, to put it bluntly, is a bit awkward. Moreover, the setting of the male protagonist is of a mature psychological age, especially when he encountered changes in his previous life. This is reflected in the previous chapters. For example, Zhao is the male protagonist's murderous enemy, but the male protagonist's feelings for her after his rebirth are not reflected enough on the level of hatred. Also, why would a mentally mature male protagonist run with something in his hands to avoid Zhao? A little unreasonable. Finally, there is the problem of statement expression. There is no ambiguity in the overall expression, but the words used cannot withstand careful chewing and are quite superficial. This point may have something in common with the previous point, which lies in experience and literary literacy. Of course, I don't mean to criticize. The evaluation I gave proves that I still agree with this book. However, this will really become a flaw. If there is a plot trend that is not to the readers' liking, it will be difficult for the readers to keep reading if the writing is not good enough. Moreover, you can only judge the sub-genres that readers like based on popular books, and you are an author of a large genre with a relatively fixed style. There are many sub-genres, so it is difficult to bet on a hot-selling direction. Even if the direction is correct, among the writers who follow the trend, it is the writing style that determines which one stands out.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's not uncommon to have a system for rebirth. It's very satisfying to watch in this category of cool writing. However, the plot is a bit delayed, and the logic is not very good. It takes a long time to become a couple. In the early stage, there were always small fights, which was relatively dull. If it is a rebirth love story, the relationship should be established earlier, and a rebirth money-making story should focus on making money. The author tries very hard to get closer to the middle, but the details of starting a business are not clearly explained. It is not enough to rely solely on the system to buy things and formulas to make money later. The writing is very good, and the tense parts are very gripping and vivid. The ending is a little rushed, with a few chapters covering the most important sugar-making part, including the possibility that Xu Feng will take revenge on the villain again, because he did die miserably in his previous life. However, it is okay to focus on describing high school life, but there are still only a few people who actually go to class. In the middle and late stages, they are basically outside, doing apprenticeships and competitions. Everyone revolves around the male and female protagonists. It does lose the development of the branch plot. The whole main plot is large. In addition, the plot is relatively slow and the branch plot is very short. It is a bit tiring to read. The author really wants to write about life outside, but is limited by the fact that he is a high school student and has to take time off every time to make up for his mistakes, which is far-fetched. The perfect scores in every category are indeed outrageous, but that's all for the fun. Generally speaking, it's very good. The template in Shuang's article is very delicate and the male and female protagonists have full images. The characters are not broken throughout the whole process. It's worth a read!

It's particularly beautiful, cleverly conceived, rich in subject matter, and the content is exciting to attract readers' attention. I'm going to follow it! !