One Piece: Heaven-Defying Comprehension, Mastering Conqueror's Haki from the Start

Yarn Revenge, never killed a single person.

The writing is very smooth, practically flawless, and logically clear, avoiding any sense of simplistic thinking. It's the most logically structured novel I've ever read. The entire book revolves around the protagonist's obsession with revenge, feeling like an expanded version of that theme, incorporating elements and events from the One Piece world.

Okay, okay, okay

It's quite good. It's different from many other One Piece novels, and it doesn't have as many plots as One Piece. It's basically just using characters and backgrounds from One Piece. The overall content and plot are very concise and straightforward. Anyway, I quite like this writing style.

If you want revenge, can't you wait until you're invincible? Or you could run away beforehand each time. Only a fool would try to fight multiple powerful generals by themselves; it's obvious they can't win, yet they keep going to their deaths.

The beginning was okay, but around chapter 90 onwards, it started to become toxic and mind-numbing. Later on, it became endlessly drawn out and indecisive. It would only let things go if it could be resolved. In short: a brain-dead novel that was still readable before chapter 90.

I personally think it's pretty good. You can take a look, though there are a few typos and some awkward sentences.

He acted recklessly from the start. How can you get revenge without money? Being arrogant and domineering without strength is foolish. He should at least have recruited or trained some elites. Therefore, I give him a rating of 1.

The protagonist is like a dimwit, unlike a typical transmigrator. He's constantly feeding kills when he can't win, doesn't play it safe, and only has the fighting power of a five or six-year-old general. He was almost killed in Impel Down once, yet he still recklessly feeds kills. This cycle repeats itself. The protagonist is incredibly clever, making this a typical "suffering protagonist" story.

He could have escaped, but he insisted on going back for another fight, then got captured and used as a research subject... The subsequent plot just keeps repeating the same pattern of escaping from prison, fighting, getting captured, and being researched.