Time Loop: Going Back to the Past to Save My Daughter

I think it's super good! It's very immersive, and the writing is great. I hope it gets better soon! Keep up the good work, author!

This novel is quite mind-bending, but also very chaotic. First of all, the names are all damn complicated—they all have the surname "Chen," and they're all two characters long, sometimes even reversed. Then there's the disjointed thinking; one minute it's about one thing, the next it's completely off-topic. One moment it's a brilliant analysis, the next it's a complete misunderstanding.

The details are handled very well, making it easy to understand, and the foreshadowing is concise. There's a sense of variation.

Don't just end up saying, "The protagonist woke up, and everything happened in his dream," when you're about to give up or don't want to continue. I've noticed many books like this, making it seem like readers enjoy such plot twists. Actually, writing like this is unethical.