Plot Twist: Save My Unhinged Brother!

I've never seen such a chaotic piece of writing. I really can't understand what it's trying to say, so I'm giving up.

It's pretty good. Most importantly, the author is quite adorable. Hahahaha. Those who have read the book will understand. The author is truly too cute!

Dear author, the word order needs some adjustment. I didn't get much information from the first few chapters, and it would be helpful to add dialogue after the characters speak to make it easier to understand. Overall, the subject matter is so-so, the characters are clearly defined but there's not much narration, and the plot is confusing. I was a bit bewildered after reading it.

What is this? I'm completely confused.

After reading the comments, the author seems really nice. I'm rooting for you!

I really can't understand what it says; it's all jumbled up. Maybe I just can't grasp the author's intention, or maybe my comprehension is limited.

The character design is okay, but it feels so chaotic and confusing.

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Here's a suggestion: the writing is a bit disorganized. The characters really resonated with me, but the later parts are quite chaotic. I hope you can organize the storylines after you finish writing it; it will be much better.

I'm so glad to have been with everyone this long, and it's finally come to an end! Hooray! Thank you all for your continued support, and thank you for your recommendations, requests for updates, and donations. Your support has been my driving force. My new book will be coming out soon, so please look forward to it! Love you all, Lu Lin