I Rule the City

The plot is okay without being pretentious or anything like that, but it's too wordy, too wordy, too wordy, and I can't explain a single thing in three or four chapters. The front may be too long-winded but the back may be too long-winded. Long-winded means too watery and too wordy.

It's a good novel. The author has wonderful writing and wonderful plot, but I don't know why it doesn't have a perfect ending?

The writing was okay at the beginning, but ended badly with too many typos.

It's a very good book, but it's so unfinished that I really can't bear to part with it.

The author writes about the ills and diseases of the past dynasties. Use the common people to knock down the mountains and give back the sky full of meteorites. Those who used to work received food stamps, cloth stamps, etc. Every month, and received a salary of a few yuan or ten yuan. Now they also receive tens of thousands of pensions every month! And the common people used to pay public grain for free to open rivers and build dams. At the end of the year, they still owed money to the production team. Now they can receive one to two hundred yuan a month in pension money! Thank you very much! I hope the author will continue to experience and write more down-to-earth books!

The plot is too clumsy and the characters are unrealistic. How could the male protagonist be so strong and not have that convenient companion.

Most of it is described in my mind, there is too much nonsense.

In this kind of novel, can you just keep being a bodyguard? Even if you are a driver, I can bear it.

Everyone is living in hell, O Micah, have mercy and let there be another great flood

It feels very messy and boring from beginning to end.