"Miss, miss, it's not good! My uncle got into a fight with someone!"
"What? My uncle is not injured, is he?"
"My aunt is fine. My aunt asked Miss Cen'er to be disabled! Now they are here!"
"Oh, it's okay!"
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"Miss! Miss! It's not good! My uncle went to Xuanyue Tower to drink wine, and he took Miss Cen'er with him!"
"Oh, it's okay!"
…
"Miss, miss, it's not good! My uncle asked me to invite you to drink wine at Xuanyue Tower!"
"Oh, it's okay, you can come too!"
…
"Miss, my uncle threatened to divorce you!"
"Oh, it's okay. I think I was too busy and neglected him. I just gave him a few concubines!"
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Eating soft food? No! I want soft food but hard work, and I have to be on top, what? Not allowed on top?
Then it's okay not to eat this soft meal! ! !
There is a lot of nonsense, but this is a new book. If you delete these, the progress will be much faster. The new book is still understandable, there are some flaws, and the writing is quite satisfactory. You should try to delete as much nonsense as possible, otherwise others will be annoyed at the beginning and will not care about how good the writing is later. I still support it.
Why do we always feel that love in books is vigorous, but love in reality is dull? "Probably it's because we can easily see the inner turmoil of the people in the book, but we can't understand the hesitation of those around us." "
There is a lot of nonsense, but this is a new book. If you delete these, the progress will be much faster. The new book is still understandable, there are some flaws, and the writing is quite satisfactory. You should try to delete as much nonsense as possible, otherwise others will be annoyed at the beginning and will not care about how good the writing is later. I still support it.
Why do we always feel that love in books is vigorous, but love in reality is dull? "Probably it's because we can easily see the inner turmoil of the people in the book, but we can't understand the hesitation of those around us." "