My Box Connects to the Song Dynasty

There's too much urban content; you should stick to writing urban fiction.

Most of it is about reality, just mundane stuff. I couldn't stand it after a few pages. They even tried to copy the subject matter badly. It's really pathetic.

It's a really stupid mistake. Your name is "Box," and all you've written is about your real-world business transactions. Don't you think that's incredibly foolish? You've written seven or eight chapters just about real-world transactions. Is a tiny piece of noodle the size of a cartload really enough to feed hundreds or thousands of people for a long time?

I'm speechless. If you're going to write about what's inside the box, focus on the box itself. Why write so much about the trivialities outside? If you can't write romance, don't write it. The focus should be on the box; just briefly mention the real-life events. Why write so much? If you write four or five chapters about interviewing a woman, who wants to read that?

Is it fun to have aquariums for women? I've given up.

If you decide to try something new based on the description, don't disappoint, or you'll inevitably get a bad review.

I'm truly impressed by you, Sixth Brother. Seeing you use gunpowder to kill villains is just too despicable.

Not bad, not bad! The theme is novel, fun and engaging. Keep it up, it'll probably reach at least 2 million words before it's finished!

Knowing that possessing a treasure is a crime, why post such a bizarre thing online?

The first ten chapters were alright, but after that, it went completely off-topic! It used the title to become a romance novel, just endlessly rambling about love and romance. Sigh, I'm dropping it.