Naruto: Tsunade and I Were Childhood Friends

It just ended out of nowhere? Are you playing with your readers?

The premise was good, a rare example of a talent-based story, but it squandered its potential, ending abruptly. The protagonist's character was also ridiculous; one second he's vowing revenge for hundreds of ninjas, the next he's befriending the Four-Tails Jinchuriki. Seriously? What a joke! A saint among saints! A transmigrator with the mentality of a child?

The premise is quite good, it's a talent-based story, but the protagonist is overly talkative and lacks any decisiveness. He uses an S-rank Lava Release technique to ambush Iwa ninja, and not a single one dies... Then the opposing Four-Tails Jinchuriki kills hundreds with a single attack, and you say you want to avenge them, but instead you explain your techniques to them and even try to befriend…

The protagonist of this fanfiction is unaware of the Naruto storyline...

Some descriptions lack detail, and at times the characters are portrayed as awful; it makes the author seem like a complete jerk.

The author has completed three books, but stopped updating them because none of them had an ending... Instead of stopping writing, it would be better to just write short stories and novellas.

This book is really weird; anyone with a brain wouldn't be able to read it.

Less playing dumb, less face-slapping plot.

What are those two latest chapters? Did they post the wrong ones?

Why would a novel about a super-rich protagonist include weapons of war? It's so incongruous, like someone preparing to fight their own country? Planning to become emperor? Or conquer the earth? It's absurd!