Cultivating Immortality in an Online Game: I Slept with a Cyber Painted-Skin Demon from the Start

Were they asked to cut it? Or did they just run out of ideas? The ending felt a bit rushed; weren't they saying it would be over soon?

Aside from the slightly inconsistent power levels, it's pretty good. Why isn't anyone watching it? And it's almost over, right? There are so many regrets. Qwq

Swords carry the legacy of a thousand years, blades cleave the world in times of chaos. Spears move like ink dots, sweeping across the land; clubs vanquish demons and pacify all directions. The steel whip, used to subdue demons, shakes the five sacred mountains; the halberd, like twin moons, is a match for ten thousand.

It's a good story for an online game novel, but the plot progresses a bit too quickly.

I've already subscribed and added this to my favorites. I hope we can mutually subscribe and add it to each other's favorites

Wait, did we break through the dimensional barrier?

If you're so capable, then come and pursue me!

I'm a bit confused looking at this; I'm just scribbling here and there. I'm not going to look at it anymore, I'm leaving.

Collect this masterpiece and wish it great success!

I've come to read your work and offer my support! (X_x;) I hope the author can also follow me and add me to their favorites!