Snowfall: From the Start, I Became Xu Fengnian's Third Brother!

The changes are a complete mess. They made the celestial phenomena sound so powerful at the beginning, but then they dragged out the killing of a few families. And couldn't they at least respect the original work a little? Do they even know what the King of Beiliang is? Where did those hundreds of thousands of troops go? Where did Da Xueqi go?

The platform requires authors to hand over 10% of their personal earnings to the original author as royalties for fanfiction. This is why the author writes such negative content about the original work. You wouldn't be happy if you were in that situation. For example, if you earn 1000 yuan from a book, you have to pay 100 yuan as royalties to the original author.

This article contains too many typos. The relationships between the characters are confused. The descriptions of place names are also a mess. There are also miscellaneous and disjointed relationships, even including elements of cultivation like Earth Immortals and Nascent Souls. (The names...)

After carefully reading dozens of chapters, I discovered a major reason. This is the author's first time writing a novel. Although it's fan fiction, the character information is too mixed up. While it's supposedly modeled after a TV series, the characters' intelligence is forcibly lowered, and the relationships are artificially worsened.

There might even be Garen's greatsword.

This is the worst I've ever seen in my life. Don't insult the original work.

What kind of writing is this? It's unbearable to read! I couldn't even finish two chapters.

Is he drunk? Keep repeating things like this. If you can't write properly, get lost and waste your data.

It's a mess, rambling, and mainly for self-indulgence.

Your criticism of the original work is a bit excessive.