Online Gaming: The Peerless Archer

Jin Ran shot the bitch through the air... So powerful

I wanted to write something very humorous, but... Oh,

It is too bland and lacks a thrilling feeling. Whether it is fighting or brotherhood, the description is too bland and there is no passion in the words. How to describe fights and group battles is very important for online game writing, and the focus is on language.

I can only barely watch the early stages, but the middle and later stages are so messed up that I can't stand the gang-building order anymore.

In the middle and later stages, I was really speechless, as if I had eaten a lump.

Anyone who can read the first twenty chapters is awesome, the characterization is really as good as stone. A character comparable to that of Tang San, even worse than Tang San. They always think that I am a game newbie, so any unnatural operation is reasonable. [Tilting head, laughing and crying] I can't stand it anymore

What's going on after 200? It's so obvious that he's not the protagonist. 204 Abandoned Books

The writing is messy, have you ever played the game? The shooter has already let people get close to him. More than 200 people are still watching. Why, why not just stand and watch him play?? Let the dogs eat your logic as well.

The last book was a mess, but this one seems to be just that.

Updates are a bit slow, very exciting