Supreme Divine Eye

Since ancient tombs are so dangerous, with arrows, eyeless centipedes, giant snakes, and vampire bats still lurking around, which tomb raider could possibly be more capable than the protagonist and manage to raid the tomb safely?

It's too wordy; I wrote three pages for one contradiction.

Why didn't Ye Xuan report the attempted rape by Liu?

Are forgers using paper from the previous dynasty to paint paintings from the later dynasty?

Which came first, the Song Dynasty or the Ming Dynasty? I'm totally confused. Can someone help me figure it out?

Many people just stop writing halfway through, without any explanation. It's all a case of starting strong but ending weakly.

The person who died in Chapter 124 was resurrected in Chapter 264. Well written, don't write it again next time.

That's it? What? It's over before even reaching the final Earthly Rank of Heaven, Earth, and Man?

Chapter 38: Life and Fortune - What does "life and fortune" refer to? Who threatened whose life? I didn't see it. Chapter 39: A Close Call - Let's talk about this again. Doesn't "a close call" refer to the woman being harmed? You sensed it and saved her, that's why it should be called a close call. Look at how you wrote it! Chapter 40: Just Driving Back - Your chapter titles are too messy. Can you please stop focusing on women all the time?

This novel has too many typos, and the sentences are disjointed and lack coherence.