A Beautiful Journey on the Immortal Path

The first part is okay, but the second part seems to have been written by a different person. They always say what would happen if the heroine was not the one who experienced this incident. Only the heroine can save the day. It feels like the narration is intrusive. And it seems that the heroine often encounters strong winds and waves, but the actual narrative is very bland, at least that's how it feels to me. I was so bland that I just listened to the book after reading this novel, and listened to it while playing games. The most annoying thing was when I heard that there were 400 chapters. I was still thinking that there were only 8 chapters left, and I guess it was just enough to end it. But as I was listening, I suddenly "finished the whole book"??? It didn't even have a hasty ending, but it suddenly disappeared. It couldn't even be called a bad ending. I was really, really annoyed by this!!!

Why is the ending so hasty?

It's quite interesting. There are so few novels about serious cultivation of immortality. Why did the author stop updating it?

By the time the author updated the article, I had forgotten the previous chapters.

Please update quickly, I haven't updated in a few days.

Why do I always write so slowly?

It doesn't look good! It's like a narrative story

I just want to ask if the heroine is still a 5-year-old child after over 200 photos. When will she grow up? She is still 5 years old even if she is soul-transported. She looks awkward when speaking and doing things in the old city. After more than 200 photos, it's time to grow up a little bit and have some heart. Haiyan is here!

It's still very good-looking, but don't you think it's weird that the heroine is just a few years old and she comes out to experience it? And she has never met other children of her own age, so it feels even weirder. Even if the author wants to highlight the heroine, it shouldn't be like this.

Will there be a male protagonist in the future? I want to watch it without cp.