Peerless Azure Phoenix

I think it could have been written better, but it was too hasty. It would definitely look better if it was written more.

It's not bad. From the first scene where I have to save the male protagonist, to the upgrades and fights with villains along the way, to the last scene where I save the male protagonist, I feel like it's not interesting. I don't like it personally.

I've read Chapter 17, and it's neither good nor bad. Let's look at the author's other books. I feel like I can't stand this one. It's not very attractive to me. It feels a little childish.

There is some contradiction. It is said that the demon-suppressing bloodline can see through everything, but it cannot see through the demon with a broken leg.

It's just so so. The whole story begins with the search for the demon-suppressing Dingjiang Pearl and the release of the demon king's seal. The process of finding the Dingjiang Pearl is easy and there is no danger. I make some friends in the process. It's easy to unlock the seal and defeat the demon king. There is no thrilling plot and the ending is very hasty.

No extras? I really can't get enough! ! !

It's good to watch, the plot is not draggy, the heroine has a goal (but not decisively), which is to find Qi Ding Jiangzhu to break the seal and release the hero, and the clone of the hero is always accompanying the heroine. Finally, we defeat the demons together. It's just that there seemed to be some holes left unfilled in the part where Qinglu Yu was killed and then rescued and became a saint. Who was the person who rescued her? What's the purpose? In short, all the elders, generals and the like in this book are good people, except Qinglu Yu's family.

Generally, some plots are not logical

Good afternoon everyone! Long time no see. I have been busy renovating my home during this period. It is almost finished and I will be moving at the end of this year~ Hehe ฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅ This book was previously said to be revised. It has been revised for a long time, but the result is still very unsatisfactory, so Mu Mu wants to finish it quickly and start a new book. I hope everyone can continue to support Mu Muya(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ I saw in the comments that some people said that Mu Mu's writing level has declined and that her writing is becoming more and more boring. I admit this, it is indeed my problem. I have always wanted to bring you wonderful and interesting stories. I will continue to study hard, break through the current bottleneck period as soon as possible, and bring you better works. One day, Mu Mu will also shout loudly, "The boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains"! Ho ho ho~ Thank you to the friends who have always supported Mumu. Even if Mumu is at a low point now, you are still encouraging Mumu's little angels. You are all the cutest little princesses in Mumu's heart! The weather is getting colder, everyone should remember to put on some clothes~~

To sum up, it looks good