Hero, Spare Your Life

Come and read with me "I Create a Path to Immortality in the City"! Collect

I only update the books but not the old books. If the old books are discontinued, please give me some reasons why.

Isn't it called Shen Tianxiu? Did you give your real name?

Well written, I won my heart!

It's just a little bit anticlimactic.

What the hell, I realized I had read a short story after reading it.

Are you not going to update another book? So beautiful

This book is too mentally taxing to read and is more difficult than attending class.

If your horizons are small, this poem can be passed down through the ages

The writing was so messy, and all the plots were told by the characters, almost like a running account. This made it impossible for me to take part in it, and I was completely outside the story. Greedy Wolf pretending to be a monk talks too much, so it would be okay to delete that whole paragraph. The plot that reveals Greedy Wolf's impersonation can be shown later. The protagonist's plot should be advanced earlier, and the protagonist's subjective initiative should be stronger to create an atmosphere where the protagonist is in the middle of the game. The mantis stalks the cicada and the oriole is behind, and the protagonist is the mantis. Only when the focus of the story is on the mantis will it give people a thrilling feeling.