I Really Don't Want to Live Forever

It's pointless to act like a coward when you have the ability.

It's weird, it's all jumbled up, a bunch of nonsensical pieces of writing suddenly appeared in the Mountain City Bar.

This is chaotic and completely nonsensical. I really don't know how it got a 9 rating. Are all the viewers kids?

I keep telling myself not to use my brain when reading novels, but I can't even read this book without using my brain. Can you please write more coherently instead of constantly breaking up and making it so confusing?

Does anyone know Liu Chang'an?

Instead, look to the Taoist exorcists; they are truly invincible.

What was the author doing? He abandoned the story halfway through; I hate authors like that the most.

Chapter Fourteen is so weak! Is this some kind of essay? Author, if you don't have the writing skills, don't force yourself to write. Poetry isn't prose, it's just something you can understand yourself. Writing this hodgepodge lowers the bar for novel writing these days!

The protagonist's personality is to my liking, but the content is too messy. It always includes some seemingly profound but incomprehensible content, which can be summed up as "a jumbled mess." It's the kind of content that makes you want to read it but also makes you want to keep flipping through the pages. Some of the content is so fictional that it's unwise to just make things up to reach a word count; it should be understandable to the reader.

I don't know what was written at the beginning, and the character dialogue in the opening chapters... Well, it's all pieced together randomly.