Undying Mecha Emperor: I Found the Strongest Mecha Core from the Start

The author could correct the typos slightly.

It makes absolutely no sense; it's a complete mess. Even a computer-generated version would be better.

Too messy, can't understand it, no theme.

It was originally a good idea, but the sentences are incoherent, the word choice is inappropriate, it's a mess, and the subject, verb, and object are not clear. I wonder if this author even graduated from junior high school?

The translation is terrible.

The translation is terribly bad.

This book has a messy logic, typos, and unclear sentence structures.

Goodness, that translated accent!

After reading over twenty chapters, I couldn't hold back any longer. If you're not cultured, don't try to write novels. Literature isn't for you to defile. At least 50% of the sentences are grammatically incorrect, the phrases are incoherent, and the words and idioms are misused. It's elementary school stuff—did you even finish elementary school? Seriously, quit writing novels. If you're not cut out for it, don't try. Go home and herd cattle. You're better suited to playing music to cows.

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