After Breaking Off the Engagement, I Was Doted on by the Emperor's Uncle

As soon as I saw the golden finger appeared, I decisively abandoned the article.

After reading Chapter 600, the first part is very exciting. I really wanted to read the love story, but I read every fascinating chapter carefully. In fact, I think it will be almost finished by chapter 600, and a lot of people who are not very relevant have appeared, and the plot is starting to drag a bit.

There is a time-traveling pregnant woman from Mo Ming who has two unborn children and still looks like she is on a battlefield running around without any trouble with her stomach. Is she from Jingang? So fake

In Chapter 62 of The Man Who Time Traveled, I wrote about the prince's rebellion and wanted to escape, but later he was reluctant to leave after something happened to him. What happened here prevented the brain circuits, and the back and forth was abnormal.

Ha, a person who traveled through time deliberately relaxed and let his sister plot in Chapter 40. What kind of brain circuit is this? Doesn't it mean that the heroine is simple? Why do you still write that you are stupid? Are you not enlightened at all?

The plot is okay, but the author is really too confused. There are all kinds of mistakes in the text, and the repetitive plot is written again and again, which affects the viewing experience.

I haven't finished reading it yet, but it started to jump around 100. I agree: the writing is still very brisk. Personally, I don't quite accept it. As the heroine who travels through the space with a plug-in, it is really difficult to use it. I want to express it but I am afraid of using it too much. It feels like being strangled by the throat and using it unpleasantly. The IQs of the male and female protagonists who have no recourse when encountering difficulties are really not suitable for high-level characters. They are all straight punches and take one step at a time. Except for the protagonist's line, the short stories of other characters are a little bit thought-provoking, and they must be written and explained. It is too procrastinating. It is like a big road with many small forks. You must go to the end of each fork and then go back to the main road. Some of the plot arrangements are stiff and the text is repetitive and verbose. Come on! Not a malicious comment

Stop reading, it's a waste of time, abandon the book. After reading more than 450 chapters, the male and female protagonists are still separated, and the female protagonist has not fully opened her heart to the male protagonist. She has always been awkward on her own, always thinking about running, leaving, and saving her life, not thinking about sharing hardships and prosperity with the male protagonist, and she still feels super wronged. Ill. Why is it that the female protagonist is the male protagonist's redeemer? Pull it down. The female protagonist is the male protagonist's psychological redeemer, but she has never taken the initiative. I thought that the relationship would gradually deepen, but in the end, the male protagonist took ten steps forward and the female protagonist took nine steps back. The relationship between the two relied entirely on the male protagonist's stubbornness. When the male and female protagonists quarrel with others, they only say "you know what you have done", which means nothing. Many plot writers forget that the logic and facts do not make sense. The eldest brother took the lead in the Seven Kills Valley tragedy. The male protagonist couldn't understand the simple logic of such an important matter, but the female protagonist smoothed it out in just a few sentences. It was very speechless.

I haven't reviewed a book for a long time. Generally speaking, the heroine is very pretentious. She is reborn and says she doesn't care about her family that much, but she has never been willing to sleep with the hero because of her grandfather's affairs? Afraid of the impact? Afraid of regret? Are women from the new era still like this? If that's the case, why don't you care about your brother? Although it was finally confirmed that he was not his biological brother, I always thought he was! The male protagonist is a love-minded person who is confused for the female protagonist. He can't think about anything that happens to the female protagonist, and feels like he can't do anything. Generally speaking, the plot can be watched, but even if the plot is readable, the description of the male and female protagonists is really speechless.

The heroine is a bit lacking in love. She obviously wants everyone to get what she needs, but she feels that they are treating her very well. The male protagonist is quite bad, he is not worthy of her in all aspects, but in that era, this kind of thing is not bad, the male protagonist is better than the prince.