Siheyuan: I Got a Gift Package from the Start, and It's an Absolute Blast!

You can't deviate too much from the original story. In the original, He Daqing ran away, abandoning Sha Zhu and his sister. If you're adding characters, you could write that the older brother left home early, or add an uncle or something similar. But adding a younger brother—what kind of story is that?

"Woman" is just a term for a woman! What kind of nonsense is that? Including dialect in novels, isn't that disgusting?

You're not even a Gen Z, what a stupid way of thinking.

He was talking about stealing chickens, and when he got home, they turned into his underwear. Was it all a one-day affair? The plot is a mess.

That's it? It had a terrible ending.

Historical fiction should closely adhere to the theme of that era, focusing on capturing its atmosphere and characteristics. Otherwise, it's better to write urban fiction, where there are no requirements and you can write whatever you want. I didn't feel any of the era's atmosphere at all.

If you earned 1,000 yuan a day in the 1960s, you might as well just write that you're the richest person in the world. Why would you need to live in a courtyard house?

The main character has ambiguous relationships with several women, so I immediately dropped it!

What kind of nonsense is this? It's completely incoherent.

Qin Huairu teaches you how to support your family in this era; He Yuzhu teaches you the price of being a saint; in short, "Full House of Love" teaches us the principles of being a person and how to survive.