The Knockout: Meng Yu Confessed to Me? I Started by Conquering the Stock Market!

The plot is quite engaging, but it's disjointed and incoherent. Could you please tidy it up before uploading again?

It's written in a mess and doesn't make any sense.

This selection system is fake, isn't it? It only appears in the first few chapters and then disappears.

I dropped the book after finishing the first chapter. Let me comment: First, according to the plot, after graduating from university, the protagonist feels his family background is inadequate and he's not good enough for the female lead, so he hesitates. At this point, I assumed it was a non-time-travel story, and that the original characters were just a character added to the plot.

There are too many typos, which greatly affects the reading experience.

Even after transmigrating to the past, I was still a useless person. I only read the first few chapters and didn't have any desire to continue reading.

I dropped it after chapter 26. The protagonist's reaction to his future father-in-law was so childish and disgusting I don't even want to talk about it. Those interested can read it themselves.

The system was later destroyed, and the cheat codes disappeared.

I didn't even want to read the first chapter. A transmigrator? Doesn't he know the plot? And he has a system? The protagonist seems indecisive and hesitant. What the heck? I had absolutely no desire to continue reading.

The writing is a bit stiff, and there are quite a few typos.