Are You Kidding? You Call This Pokemon?

This protagonist is so pathetic, constantly being chased and fleeing, living under someone else's roof, betrayed, and only becoming powerful at the very end. It could be shorter; I'd rather not write it at all.

My brother's name is Wang Kai.

This strange skill, coupled with the remarkably calm situation—isn't that surprising?

I think it could be written in a more exaggerated way.

In the realm of Pokémon fiction, this book is relatively fortunate; the characters are well-developed, and the plot is quite good, but it has escaped the realm of cheat codes.

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I don't even want to read chapter 50 anymore. At least put some effort into it!

The updates are so slow. Last time it took at least 24 hours, this time it's 29.

Author, did you send it? The updates are so slow, I can't get enough!

I didn't want to watch it anymore before I finished it.