One Piece: I Revive Ace with the Rinnegan on a Live Broadcast at Marineford

You have the ability to not wipe out all the pirates and change the world, but instead you keep protecting them. I know, all the pirates are your fathers, and you can't bear to see your fathers die.

The writing feels a bit outrageous.

It feels like a novel where the author is talking to himself.

I'm completely baffled. It's a total mess, not the plot, but the writing. It feels disjointed and incoherent, giving me a headache.

They came looking completely bewildered, and they left looking completely bewildered. It was such a mess, it made my head spin.

It's so funny. The Marineford War was already over, and the Empress had already fallen for Luffy by then, but the protagonist insisted on changing the plot and had a relationship with the Empress.

How could Zephyr, who didn't die during the Marineford War, be resurrected using Edo Tensei? The Straw Hats didn't face Zephyr until two years after the Marineford War.

The author did not write the premise of the Impure World Reincarnation.

The beginning was alright, but the second half left me a bit confused.

The beginning was quite chaotic, and this system didn't appear very often.