The Extraordinary Little Divine Farmer

Are you sure you want to publish something just because I offer some suggestions? Then you should study hard!

This formula is too cliché... Can it really be justified that female volunteers in rural villages don't have female family members living with them? The following lines are bound to cause problems. No originality!

Why do all novelists follow the same formula? The protagonist is bullied, injured, or harms those around him, yet he has the power but dares not retaliate against those who want to harm him. Why? Is it the author's fault, the protagonist's fault, or social factors?

I can't read any more, I'm leaving. Thanks for your hard work, author.

The protagonist is nothing like a college student; he doesn't use his brain, always sits and waits, doesn't know how to explore and develop, and has a somewhat short-sighted vision.

It's 12,000, discounted to 10,000, then sold for 9,000 without the discount. The PE teacher's math is really impressive.

The author probably hasn't lived in the countryside. People in the same village generally don't call Liu Yu "Little Liu" or "Little Li." They usually call him by his name. If they want to include "Little," then calling Liu Yu "Little Yu" would be more normal.

I might not be good at math, but jade and emeralds aren't sold at high prices directly. Instead, they're used to absorb spiritual energy to raise turtles and accelerate the production of medicinal herbs, which are then sold at low prices.

You're robbing someone else's Peter to pay Paul!

Instead of applying phone screen protectors, are we selling pancakes?