I Just Reached the Earthly Immortal Realm, and You Want Me to Rebel?

What are you writing, buddy? The outline and plot are a mess. The storyline is chaotic too. What's going on? Are you planning to create something out of this world, buddy?

Honestly, this novel is poorly written. The author is probably not even twenty years old. The beginning was passable, but the more you read, the more it seems to affect your intelligence.

This author is probably single and has never been in a relationship.

The match was boring from the start; a peak-level Innate Realm cultivator couldn't defeat an eighth-level Innate Realm cultivator.

It's utterly worthless, so rubbish, I wouldn't have even bothered looking at it from a distance.

What's most annoying is being completely controlled by the system; if you don't follow its instructions, you're doomed, and this system is especially talkative.

The protagonist is constantly thinking about the people of this era, people from a different time than his previous one. He also keeps bringing up his past life. As a martial artist, it's impossible for him to lose control and only react with impotent rage. It's rare to see such a truly ordinary male protagonist. The male protagonists in novels I've seen before are all ruthless transmigrators who know how to be patient and restrained.

The main character is such a dog, it's infuriating to look at.

I've already looked at the table of contents, but I'm still dawdling.

The author's understanding of love is still at an elementary school level; those who understand will understand, and those who don't will understand after reading a book.