War Spirit, Heavenly Martial

Are the people ranked lower than him older than the protagonist???

I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. What the hell is this writing? Junior high school students can write better compositions than this one!

Xiaoxiaoxiao??? How many times do you laugh in one chapter? Aren't you afraid of facial cramps?

To be honest, the writing is a bit messy. One of the protagonists is Lao Liu, who is only 15 years old. Is he already a genius? His younger brothers and sisters are all higher in cultivation than him and are younger than him. Aren't they more geniuses?

Even though they are such an awesome family, everyone still dares to hunt them down.

Ye Yu's new book, "The Holy Path of Martial Arts", is that the martial arts is vast and the holy path is elusive. In this life, I only pursue the peak of martial arts and the holy path is at the end. It was published in a certain episode. I hope everyone can support it.

This book is so boring

Plum sword, bamboo sword, why do they sound so awkward?

Okay, I don't have enough time to comment. Let's talk about it. I saw that the protagonist was still hovering at the lowest level for five years, and only five levels were added. Five years ago, he was in the first level, and five years later, he was in the sixth level. Funny. I couldn't stand it for a moment, there was no basic logic, and it wasn't the type of foundation-building elixir. It would take more than ten years to reach a small level. What you write is originally a fantasy novel. I can understand why the basic level of fantasy is so outrageous. It becomes more difficult to improve later. It takes five years for you to reach the lowest level, with an average of one level per year. You are funny. I will abandon it after I finish writing it. What you write is for people to read. It's normal for me to complain if I can't stand it. The author wants to criticize everyone who says it's not good-looking, but I don't think you have a temper. Why don't you let people tell you if your writing is not good? Yes, you don't have to watch it if it doesn't look good, but I still can't give a bad review? Can't complain? Then close the comment area. Can you only listen to good things but not bad things? Originally there was something wrong with your settings, but others said your content was not good and there was something wrong with it? I have to complain. If I don't complain, I'll be very angry. I've never seen such an outrageous setting. It doesn't look good, there's something wrong with the content, it just doesn't look good. After writing it, discard it. There is something wrong with what you wrote. Don't bullshit, it means you have a problem. I'm right, you're wrong. If you don't want anyone to tell you if there are problems with what you wrote, then what kind of novel do you write?

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I am a little confused. The protagonist is only at the first level when he returns to his family. He is also a group of high-strength people. Who is the Lord of Hell? What kind of gold medal killer is he? The protagonist is so weak. I want to know how he can do it? The author arranged so many powerful subordinates and so many powerful identities for the protagonist, but in the end, the family is only in the Body Tempering Realm. I want to know if a person in the Body Tempering Realm can also be a gold medal killer?