The Qin Dynasty: A God-Tier Army System

It was frustrating to watch. The main character didn't even feel like the main character. He was always being manipulated.

The previously well-written novel was written like shit when it was returned to modern times. The plot was forced to end. It was so disappointing.

It's really ugly, the opening scene of the land gods is over 20 chapters long. Can't beat a few golden elixirs???? There are many big realms in between, please note that they are big realms. It is not a stage of small realm.

He is a land god, and he is being chased and beaten. Have you ever seen a land god being chased and beaten by a little Karami? Can he break through the defense? Given his realm, he can't even break the defense, right?!! It's just like what you'd do to a baby to hit a grown man! Don't give me anything like a land fairy at the beginning, the protagonist is still panicking!!!

I gave up after reading chapter 13. I'm a nymphomaniac. Don't write about women. If you write about women, your readers will be reduced by one-third.

At the beginning, the land fairy was deliberately lowered in strength by the author. Speechless, I can't stand it anymore

The words spoken by the characters in it are not at all like those spoken by people from the Qin Dynasty, they are all spoken in vernacular. Could it be that these people have also traveled through time? The person who wrote the book probably didn't have a deep understanding of history.

The main character is really rubbish

The writing is so-so, with a bull's head and a wrong horse's tail.

Can't tell what is a hall and what is a watch? I don't know how homework grew up