Junior Brother, Why So Grumpy?

Haha, wow, cultivators live worse than farmers, haha, what kind of nonsense is this? Did you miss kindergarten?

It's all good, especially the main characters who are fleshed out and have very positive values. The only problem is that the plot is too fast-paced, with one event after another, which can be mentally tiring after watching for a while.

The woman's face was veiled, obscuring her features, and her expression was cold and stern! Does this make sense?

Why did it get so verbose towards the end? It's so verbose. Unbearably verbose. So verbose!

It's easy to imagine that the character names were chosen haphazardly.

It has a lot of flaws, many typos, and the writing style is like that of an elementary school student who hasn't graduated.

I don't really understand it, I really don't understand it. How can someone so saintly, who wants to control everything, cultivate immortality?

Well, perhaps the author intended to create a story of intertwined and passionate relationships between the protagonists, but unfortunately, what I saw more of was their stupidity, brainlessness, and weakness. They were as soft as mud when they needed to be tough, and as hard as rocks in a latrine when they needed to be soft, all because of some vague notion of dislike or pride.

It's filled with too many flaws. I can't even finish reading the free version.

It's frustrating to watch. Even if someone who cultivates immortality is doing poorly, they shouldn't be as miserable as someone who practices martial arts. Can't they just go out and take on some jobs to make money?