I Really Don't Know How to Cultivate Immortality

Mortals, refining Qi, building foundation, golden elixir, Nascent Soul, transforming into gods...

The ending is inexplicable. Although you can guess the plot if you read many novels, it is better not to write it if it ends like this. The beginning is quite normal and messed up.

What the hell? How can you be called a protagonist if you don't show off? It's all the people around you who are showing off. The protagonist doesn't do anything. He's convinced.

Anticlimactic! Is the ending too hasty? ! I won't tell you the endings of the other girls either! Master Su Wen mentioned above didn't say who he was! The trip to the desert was not described in detail either! What exactly are dark forces? What is the power of the abyss in Ye Chen? How to recover mana? A series of questions including why the small yard is so weird were not explained clearly! Author, why are you so anxious? Are you afraid that you won't be able to get the royalties if you don't finish it? The book I wrote earlier is quite good, but it was all in vain!

The plot is so illogical! The protagonist fell from a god to a mortal at the beginning. After that, I just wanted to be a salted fish. I had no ambitions and no ideals! All I want to do is eat and wait to die! It's just that the gods are paying attention to him behind the scenes and keeping him safe as a mortal, just to watch the performances of those around him! Nothing to see!

It's a great article, but can it be updated faster? Three chapters a day is not enough.

I'm a little confused. The protagonist turns out to be the God of War, but his cultivation has been eliminated and he is now a mortal. How dare he treat those cultivators with such an arrogant attitude. Isn't this in line with the attitude of ordinary people towards cultivators?

There's too much nonsense. The author's level is limited, so don't write it.

Damn it, I started coming to Peach Blossom just after the game started, and when I saw anyone in the Golden Core stage, I called them senior, and the woman in red knew all the treasures. She thought she knew all the treasures for being so low-level, so she was just teasing us?

The previous ones were all very well written, but the subsequent ones from the time they came out until now have been very mediocre. Without the protagonist, nothing would happen.