Dragon and Phoenix Immortal-Extinguishing Art

You call this a novel? Are you kidding me?

The story is good, but there's too much unnecessary dialogue.

It always lets others show off, and then the main character gets killed. Terrible, terrible.

Why is it always the protagonist who makes the moves? Are all the others who came along just there to eat?

This book is terrible; it ends abruptly, as if it's rushing to reincarnate...

Li Fangyi's hands and feet were severed, yet he could still cover his mouth with his hands! The author's IQ is incredibly high...

I just want to ask the author: if the protagonist managed to steal the Yin-Yang Golden Fruit, why did he have to reveal his identity? Is it the author's IQ or the protagonist's that's low?

It feels a bit like reading a user manual!

I saw a line in the book, "I don't kill women," which was hilarious.

A holy sect member kills people indiscriminately and without reason, and the entire sect wants to kill the protagonist—isn't that just nonsense?