Reborn: The Suit-Wearing Mad Dragon

Like the all-around master, my favorite for the protagonist is Zhong Qingxue. Just like Li Huaifeng likes Du Shishi, I find it very disgusting. The protagonist clearly said that he likes mature women and does not like this kind of girl. This kind of giant baby heroine must be said to be the young Qin Ge who influenced the agent Qin Ge. According to my own opinion, the agent Qin Ge only inherited the memory of the young Qin Ge and became a virgin. There are no two personalities. The one who dominates the body is now the agent Qin Ge. The one I like the most should not be Zhong. Qingxue, if it is a fusion of two personalities, it shouldn't be like this. Agent Qin Ge likes the mature type, and the dominance lies with Agent Qin Ge. Emotionally, it shouldn't be so heavily affected by that boy's love song. Anyway, I feel weird. As long as this Zhong Qingxue doesn't write the same giant baby as Du Shishi, I feel fine. When I watched The Almighty Player, the degree really pissed me off. Shit can write about giant babies. The heroine of this giant baby is also very successful in writing.

Children's tricks, I am over 50 years old and almost 60 years old, I can't play a lot with you.

It's actually a very good book, but the ending is too fast. I hope there will be a second volume. I sincerely request the book.

I remember there was a movie called Canglong, where an agent was reborn and then unified the local underworld and killed people all the way [sweat]. The first cool movie I read was called Neon Light, Dragon Hall, Tiger Hall, Wolf Hall, Nanshe Ren, and the protagonist Jiang Feng [sweat]

This book is not as good as a new one, this one is suitable for children

How is Tang Jiajia? I really care. Isn't she dumped?

To be honest, I think this book, although it is wonderfully written in some places, still has many problems. The rating of 8.0 May be low, but it is definitely not that high. I have seen Chapter 540, and I think the biggest problem is the character development of the protagonist. It can be seen that the author wants to create a heroic personality from cold-blooded to a certain degree of warmth, but this can be said to have a great impact on the perception of the plot, especially when it comes to the harem. Not to mention the many problems in the image creation of the harem heroines (such as Chen Lianzhi), the protagonist desperately wants to get rid of it. This makes readers feel bored no matter how they look at it. Even if you apply modern social values, if you really open a harem, no one will say anything. Anyway, the protagonist is a scumbag. Secondly, there is the attendance mission. You said that your agent goes out to do the mission. The most basic thing is that the people under you should be obedient and rigorous. But if you bring this harem character again and again, especially the agent character who has conflicts with the protagonist every day, first of all, it will disgust the readers, reduce the interest in reading, and reduce the favorability of the female character. Don't worry about how to whitewash it later. In many cases, readers will quit without seeing the whitewash later. Secondly, it will make people think that this agent is like child's play. Okay, you think this may make the protagonist's power more prominent, but this is an agent! Agent! Halfway through the mission, the heroine gets into a conflict and makes her own decisions. How is this done in a secret agent mission? It seems that except for the protagonist and a few supporting characters, no one else can do the tasks. Then there is the issue of the allocation of characters. After chapter 400, you will find that many characters often have to be written in separate plots. These female protagonists are written separately, and then transferred to those female protagonists. There is a sense of fragmentation, and even Mitsui Kanaji has basically no role in the back. You said there are too many tasks to write, and I understand that, but do you really not think about writing a few fewer female protagonists? I read more than 500 chapters and saw that there was an inexplicable addition of Huamanzhi. I really wanted to vomit. Let's deal with the first few harems first. Then there is the setting of an ancient warrior. To be honest, I accepted it very much at first, but later I found that the protagonist's strength grew too slowly. Sometimes the setting of the ancient warrior is simply to show off a little bit when the protagonist is sending a message. Since there is this setting, the protagonist wants revenge. The heart should be to directly and quickly promote the protagonist's strength growth after receiving the apprenticeship, and set up relevant plots with the relevant ancient warrior families, instead of playing an agent game every day to catch you and catch him, save you and save her, you betray the country and he rebels, which is almost useless to the actual main line. You may say that this is a change in shaping the character of the protagonist, and at the same time introducing subsequent related characters, which requires plot support. However, this can be advanced simultaneously with the main plot. Just set the task to the ancient warrior family. Also, the character design is bloated, such as Zhang Shen'er, Chen Lianzhi, and Mother Chen. These characters are completely dispensable. In order to promote the development of the plot, they can be replaced by other methods. There is no need to add these useless harems. In addition, if you only cultivate feelings and don't get started, it will be so frustrating that you might as well not open it. Finally, I haven't seen the ending yet. I think it's good that I can hold on until chapter 540. I can read so much because of the exciting and exciting plot design, which supports me to keep reading. But according to this progress, I think the follow-up will need at least double the number of words to support the plot, fill in every pit, and finally reach a perfect ending. It feels like the plot of the whole book is only halfway through, but only one-fifth is left. With such a small number of words, it's impossible to fill in all the holes, let alone give a perfect ending, at least that's what I think.

It's all-powerful. The routine is the same.

Pretending to be 13 slaps you in the face and I don't want to watch it!

I came from Licking Dog. After reading this book and Almighty, I feel like they were written by different people. How can they be so different? It's such a waste of time. I vomited.