Reborn: The Suit-Wearing Mad Dragon

It's just that every critical moment, the chain falls off, and only half of the results are seen. Then I turned over and saw that it was gone. Every time I see this situation, I always have insomnia, and I can't sleep every night.

To be honest, I think this book, although it is wonderfully written in some places, still has many problems. The rating of 8.0 May be low, but it is definitely not that high. I have seen Chapter 540, and I think the biggest problem is the character development of the protagonist. It can be seen that the author wants to create a heroic personality from cold-blooded to a certain degree of warmth, but this can be said to have a great impact on the perception of the plot, especially when it comes to the harem. Not to mention the many problems in the image creation of the harem heroines (such as Chen Lianzhi), the protagonist desperately wants to get rid of it. This makes readers feel bored no matter how they look at it. Even if you apply modern social values, if you really open a harem, no one will say anything. Anyway, the protagonist is a scumbag. Secondly, there is the attendance mission. You said that your agent goes out to do the mission. The most basic thing is that the people under you should be obedient and rigorous. But if you bring this harem character again and again, especially the agent character who has conflicts with the protagonist every day, first of all, it will disgust the readers, reduce the interest in reading, and reduce the favorability of the female character. Don't worry about how to whitewash it later. In many cases, readers will quit without seeing the whitewash later. Secondly, it will make people think that this agent is like child's play. Okay, you think this may make the protagonist's power more prominent, but this is an agent! Agent! Halfway through the mission, the heroine gets into a conflict and makes her own decisions. How is this done in a secret agent mission? It seems that except for the protagonist and a few supporting characters, no one else can do the tasks. Then there is the issue of the allocation of characters. After chapter 400, you will find that many characters often have to be written in separate plots. These female protagonists are written separately, and then transferred to those female protagonists. There is a sense of fragmentation, and even Mitsui Kanaji has basically no role in the back. You said there are too many tasks to write, and I understand that, but do you really not think about writing a few fewer female protagonists? I read more than 500 chapters and saw that there was an inexplicable addition of Huamanzhi. I really wanted to vomit. Let's deal with the first few harems first. Then there is the setting of an ancient warrior. To be honest, I accepted it very much at first, but later I found that the protagonist's strength grew too slowly. Sometimes the setting of the ancient warrior is simply to show off a little bit when the protagonist is sending a message. Since there is this setting, the protagonist wants revenge. The heart should be to directly and quickly promote the protagonist's strength growth after receiving the apprenticeship, and set up relevant plots with the relevant ancient warrior families, instead of playing an agent game every day to catch you and catch him, save you and save her, you betray the country and he rebels, which is almost useless to the actual main line. You may say that this is a change in shaping the character of the protagonist, and at the same time introducing subsequent related characters, which requires plot support. However, this can be advanced simultaneously with the main plot. Just set the task to the ancient warrior family. Also, the character design is bloated, such as Zhang Shen'er, Chen Lianzhi, and Mother Chen. These characters are completely dispensable. In order to promote the development of the plot, they can be replaced by other methods. There is no need to add these useless harems. In addition, if you only cultivate feelings and don't get started, it will be so frustrating that you might as well not open it. Finally, I haven't seen the ending yet. I think it's good that I can hold on until chapter 540. I can read so much because of the exciting and exciting plot design, which supports me to keep reading. But according to this progress, I think the follow-up will need at least double the number of words to support the plot, fill in every pit, and finally reach a perfect ending. It feels like the plot of the whole book is only halfway through, but only one-fifth is left. With such a small number of words, it's impossible to fill in all the holes, let alone give a perfect ending, at least that's what I think.

I finished reading it in one night. It was very interesting. I really like this type of novel. If you are reading the comments, you can take a look.

Holy Mother, the plot is on the low side, and people with low IQs are always introduced. The female half has low IQ, and the male protagonist's soul is mixed to write about the Holy Mother. She is essentially a selfish and blind person, and the idea is that nothing can happen around him. In reality, there are people with similar mental illnesses. Most of the plot is written and the main plot is involved a little bit. There may even be situations where the main plot remains unchanged for a long time and is almost forgotten. Then at some point, the main plot was brought out to take the blame, and various irrelevant things and irrelevant characters often appeared, which made the whole story lengthy. Too many elements are counterproductive.

What's wrong with this? Can you tell me?

From "Almighty" to "Crazy Dragon", the skill remains the same

Great

Yes, both the plot and the text are different from ordinary works, and there are a lot of bad words that are wrongly learned! Like!

What a ridiculous ending, no? How on earth can you keep writing this ending? Can you stand it? Can you stand the ridiculous ending you wrote, Da Ang Lao Shi? Are you at ease??? The previous plot is so good, but there are still so many pitfalls. I'm so angry. Why are you talking? You're so angry, and you're trying to divert traffic to your new book. I came here specifically from the villain. I read your book twice in the past few days and didn't go to bed until five or six o'clock. You're such a fool to book friends!!! , My heart aches so much, I can only pray that the book of villains will have a good ending, that all the pitfalls will be filled, and that there will be a lot of food.

This book is not an ordinary bad ending. It ends in the middle. Yes, it ends with only one chapter.