The Immortal Dao Pill Venerable

How could he be promoted from the sixth level of Body Tempering to the Yuan Condensing Realm without mentioning it, yet he was already condensing Yuan as soon as he appeared on the scene? Also, when the great elder saw his son die at his hands, he was still so calm and rational. There was no description of the scene where he was gnashing his teeth. This excessive look was very abrupt.

It's too long-winded and unattractive, and it keeps repeating itself.

It's so long-winded, like a primary school student writing a composition, just making up the numbers.

I won't tell you whether it looks good or not. Can you please stop getting the protagonist's name wrong all the time? Sometimes it's Chu Yun and sometimes it's Lin Fan. If you get it wrong once or twice, forget it. If you get it wrong a dozen or twenty times, that's a bit too much. Can you be smarter?

Can't you just write the word "Ke Deng"? These two words are everywhere.

The body is broken into pieces and the ghost is dead. Gao Hu is dead and possesses the elder.

I came here for the title of the book, Alchemy Master, but I didn't see a single word of the alchemy content.

I said to your mother, what do you mean by a real sentence? It's always repeated.

I wrote dozens of them in one reincarnation. Oh, you have nothing to say.

I've finished reading it, but I haven't refined a single elixir yet!