Immortal Martial War God

It begins with the title of King of Xia, and becomes the King of Nan in the middle of the writing. There is really no one else who can write this well!

At first I thought it was readable, but the more the author wrote, the less readable it became! [Tilting head, laughing and crying]

I don't have the brains to write novels well. I wrote a mess from the beginning. The villains are stupid and bad. They are simply speechless and completely illogical.

It's outrageous, a woman calls his father an old man like this? Saying this in front of a man and expecting to get the land deed? It's impossible to give it to him even if you lick a dog, it's written in a mess

The licking dog starts, I'm speechless

Don't be a holy mother, don't add a dog, get some subordinates, it's quite the kind of experience.

The logic is very poor. The protagonist's grandfather was killed. Isn't it reasonable for the protagonist to take revenge? In order to express his apology, he asked others to give him a sword, haha

Run quickly, the protagonist, the Virgin Mary on Earth

It's such a terrible, long-winded novel.

Hey, there really isn't anyone who can be reborn as a strong person nowadays.