Sword Immortal, Please Take It Slow

The writing of this book is very good. The concept is also good. But the YY is too much... It is said that the protagonist did not hesitate to take on low-profit jobs for a few taels of silver at the beginning. In the end, I counted my belongings within a few days. I found 6,000 taels of silver, 500 taels of gold, and 500 to 600 taels of spiritual stone... How can you take on a job with less than two taels of silver if you have this kind of family background?... It is said that a little adds up to a lot. But the protagonist has only been practicing for a year or two... Also, in the first scene, I picked up a handful of spiritual treasures that were almost destroyed by a dozen powerful people. And even if you pick up a dog on the roadside, you still have to bend down and hug it... This happens immediately with a roar. Not to mention that the protagonist's skills are automatically presented... The author has such a good writing style. Don't you know that most readers want to read an inspirational work about growing from weak to strong? And this process of growing from weak to strong... Actually depends on the accumulation of money, the updating of equipment, and the acquisition of skills. No matter how good your other writing is... But the economic system is broken. You don't need to change the equipment at the beginning of the chapter. The skills are the kind that you don't need to find at all. What's the point of this? … YY's is too much. It's not even as good as the system's writing. Even the system has struggled to achieve success.

What's wrong with this is that the system still has to do tasks to get paid. You can get whatever you want.

If I save this woman, there is no need to read this book... It's really depressing to write so much

The book is a good book and the writing is very exciting. I personally feel that this book can be ranked in the top 20 on several platforms. The top ten books on many platforms are actually "topped" by themselves. For example, some "cute" main bookshelfs collect one book and reward the other. Is this normal? It is definitely not normal. So I can't judge the quality based on the ranking... But this book is not without its shortcomings. The main problem lies in the control of the rhythm. .. For example, if you have played an RPG [role playing] game, you will know that at the beginning, players can define various attributes of their characters... This book is equivalent to directly calling up the modifier and changing all attributes to full. If the full level of the panel is ten, the protagonist's luck is directly changed to 100. This is not counting. After entering the game, the money and equipment are directly modified. The first-level trumpet is money 9999. The best equipment that can only be obtained with a level 50 account... Is this still interesting? And forget it like this... The author never turns off the modifier during the game. He adds equipment at any time... For example, he directly modified eight Water God Pills before reaching level 10. These eight pills can only be purchased by a level 30 account that sells all his wealth. And it can also buy the life of a level 20 NPC... Maybe the author will say, you are too short-sighted... Do you think this level 50 spirit treasure is against the sky? How many pills have been added and you can't adapt to it? Do you know that the protagonist will become a god in the future... What does this mean... Maybe this is true in the author's mind. But have you considered the reader's feelings... Not everyone wants to read Jack Ma's biography... This is like a classic game. Maybe you can play it slowly and calmly, and you can play it for a few months, and in the next few years. They are all endlessly memorable... But after you turn up the modifier, you will feel uninterested within a few days. I recommend the author to read the following books to see why it has become a classic. How delicately controls the rhythm... Jian Lai. [I think most of the people who come to this platform are for the General Manager's books]. The first 8 million words are about the True Empress... I can't hold back the rest. This is a book about other books... A few of Squid's books. The best is Lord of Mysteries. The protagonist will become a god in the future. But people still go up step by step. Adjust the modifier? I don't say if there is one. But generally The reader can't feel it at all. This book is the only physical book I have bought... [The cover of Jianlai is really bad]... The Demonic Cage of the Decadent Dragon. This brother has been writing books for more than ten years. The most classic work in it… The top ten monthly tickets on other platforms... Haha. They are all... Just like the cute master's bookshelf with only one book. Everyone knows it.

Haha. Wasn't it possible that just a pot of Water God Pill could be exchanged for the entire net worth of a third-level monk?…With a roar, he got the spiritual treasure that "more than a dozen third-level monks would not hesitate to rob hundreds of thousands of people"... What has happened to this?

Can you remember a person's appearance as a baby? And can you recall it seven or eight years later?

Is this to send away the other apprentices who have trouble with the protagonist?

... Based on the protagonist's good fortune, it should take 50 years to complete the game, right?

A top-quality elixir that can help a second-level ghost to repair its foundation. Do you have six of them?... If you have two or three, it's okay. This kind of medicine is very effective against ghosts, but not so effective for humans... You still keep it on hand and prepare so many at one time?...

… Instead of ingots, use a white sword? This sword is something that more than a dozen powerful men are fighting for... What if the news leaks out? Will Jiuxuan Guan be able to protect it again? Shouldn't I use ingots to pretend to be it?