The Abandoned Daughter's Path to Immortality

I'm here again, keep writing and click push.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the development of the plot is a little slow in the past, but this is not a big problem. A good story is really good. Even if there are a few typos, it doesn't matter. So, the author, just don't let the plot stall.

The ending is sloppy and the previous foreshadowing is basically unrecovered.

After reading a few chapters, I didn't find it good. Then I read the comments and gave up! The heroine is too weak

In the early stages, the heroine's character was quite normal. When the Luofu family was wiped out. I feel like the heroine is quite smart. After she became a disciple of the male protagonist. The more I looked at it, the more something was wrong. The character design turned into silly and sweet. The feeling of becoming a child.

Even though it sucks, I'll still give you a few votes.

The ending was too rushed, leaving many pitfalls unfinished

It sucks, it ends inexplicably, it has no ending.

The middle looks good, but the ending is really not that good

Really, this is the first time I read a bad novel and it still has so many positive reviews. I am speechless.