The Craziest War God

How could he be so awesome and be kidnapped by others after meeting his daughter? Pig brain

The logic is not rigorous enough, the plot is relatively immature, the writing is relatively green, and the cultural background is still insufficient.

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No way, it's poisoning me. Vomiting.

The way of thinking when writing a book is different from that of normal people [Tilting head, laughing and crying]

This book can make good people look stupid

It's too far-fetched to think that sending an invitation can go wrong, right? Is the whole book just to increase the word count of misunderstandings? Since the invitation letter is so important and rare, shouldn't it be sent to the person concerned? Should express delivery be delivered to your doorstep, right? What Ye Liang wants is not given to Ye Liang, but sent to other people's homes. Is this forcibly giving wisdom to others? Ye Liang spends the whole day doing nothing but thinking that he is very good. He can't even figure out his identity. He is scolded as a coward every day. Even though he is strong in his heart, he also brings trouble to his wife and daughter. Do you want to move yourself or the readers?

Write the heroine as Ruozhi

To be honest, it is difficult to write about urban themes. The plot of this book is exciting. The story is often surprising and reasonable. It conveys the feelings of family and country. The protagonist has the world at heart, is decisive in killing, and has a tender heart and profound friendship.

There is really nothing to write about. How dare you write about something that is not as good as Liu? So tired.