I accidentally sent myself back to ancient times! I met a man once and immediately decided to marry him? Sure, why not. We'll marry first and fall in love later. If it doesn't work out, I'll dump him! In modern times, they call it a whirlwind marriage.
What? My new husband can't work or earn money? Sure, why not. He's handsome, so he's nice to look at. He's obedient and well-behaved, so he's no trouble. Modern women can support a family just fine.
What? I couldn't resist my husband's good looks and pounced on him like a hungry tiger? Sure, why not. Drinking comes with risks. I touched him, kissed his face, and forgot what it meant to be shy! In modern times, they call it a one-night stand.
Hey, hey, why are you clinging to me now? Get lost! You slept with me, and now you're chasing me to have your babies, turning away every handsome man who comes near me. Weren't we supposed to flirt around together and leave each other alone? It was all a damn lie!
These figures cannot be taken seriously. An ordinary family earns two or three taels a month. Here, a doctor can give you fifty taels casually. The house that was previously built with five rooms only cost 40 taels.
The quality of the heroine needs to be improved, and the novel is like a running account
Am I the only one who thinks the heroine swears too much? It can exaggerate the atmosphere when appropriate, but too much will reduce your quality.
Totally illogical, too many typos
Can the heroine not use the first person pronoun? It looks awkward.
It's not like a novel, it's like a self-narration, a storyteller!
After picking it up and reading it, I felt it was just average. The first-person description is very strange, and at the same time, it is also strange that I have the space to see who is talking to whom, and no one has investigated it! He can say whatever he wants without thinking, and what happens is also strange! Just watch!
The first part is a bit chatty, but the second part is fast-paced. Fine
I really like it if I can keep watching it.
Poor writing: There is no first-person diamond, and there are also inexplicable God's perspective and third-person perspective mixed in.