Emperor of Jianghu

In the mid-1950s, chivalrous chapter martial arts novels disappeared in the mainland due to a series of changes; however, they gained new prosperity in Hong Kong and formed today's new style of martial arts novels. For new martial arts novels, "new" means removing the outdated language of old novels, using new literary techniques to conceive the whole book, absorbing novel expression techniques from foreign novels, combining martial arts, history, and romance, and integrating traditional public cases with modern reasoning, bringing martial arts novels into a new realm. ## @ Situ Changqing himself

If the author wants to write about Internet pornography, it is recommended to abandon the rhythm of traditional pornography. The opening paragraph about keeping filial piety should be a separate wedge. It does not need too much description of the environment, but it must be compelling, so that readers have enough interest to deeply understand the story that happens next in Haoyue Mountain. There are too many verbose words in the scene in the first chapter. Do you know why every popular book has a few jokes that are well-known to everyone? It's not really about how awesome the writing is and how detailed the descriptions are, it's just because it's interesting. Internet marketing does not require good writing. Good writing can only be used as a bonus. What really matters is the story and imagination. Your beginning is so attractive, but it really doesn't make people feel bright. And I roughly counted, there should be six or seven characters appearing in your chapter. Do you think any book about gods has a bunch of names at the beginning? Writing about so many people at the beginning will not only fail to give readers a sense of the grand background, but will actually discourage them. I understand that the plot you want to express must have so many people present, so it further reflects the advantage of writing the part of Shouxiao as a separate wedge. The Beijing accent spoken by the waiter at the tea shed is also a problem. I didn't read the rest of the story, but I can probably guess what the author was thinking: the protagonist is from the Capital. You want to indirectly hint to the reader through this sentence, but what is the actual situation? Besides cutting off the flow of the plot, what else do you get? Establish a character? Promote the plot? If we don't write this paragraph, but instead focus on depicting the protagonist as an ordinary person who desires to practice spiritual practice, readers will find out after reading: Ah, it turns out that the protagonist is a person related to the part about keeping filial piety, and comes from the land of Gyeonggi. This small psychological gap will make them feel satisfied and interested in reading, and a point is wasted. Besides, don't you think the protagonist is unreal? Coming from a long way from the capital, you didn't focus on describing the fatigue caused by the journey, and you didn't try to cover up the nobility of the protagonist. Instead, you wrote about being stopped by the gatekeeper and then being recognized by the policeman and welcomed in for a talk? This may not be too easy, right? Do you think it's possible? This kind of plot is very cliche and cannot give readers a sense of satisfaction. You have to create obstacles for the protagonist. It is better to write that you are blocked by the gatekeeper and then try your best to enter Haoyue Mountain and find a woman who knows you. This way of writing will strengthen the reader's impression. I didn't read it carefully, so I'll just say this much. This author, ***, is the most ruthless person in the human world, and he is the one who complains about the little prince Wu Shan and Qing Tian.

Report this author with a real name for not coding properly. Play games every day in Shuiqun and criticize by name.

You must have never heard of an authentic Beijing accent.

Don't be too little if you give me a tip. This is my entire balance.

You finally updated it. I thought you had finished writing your paper and went to tighten the screws.

Since the author, that is, I am preparing for "study" and other things, I can't update everything tomorrow... The story of "The King of Jianghu" is almost finished. It will probably be finished at 990,000 words. At that time, I will write another 10,000 words about the creation process and experience of this book in the past few months. The whole book has a total of 1 million words! Although I didn't achieve any results, I was content and enjoyed it.

The Emperor: What an evil deed. The crime of lying about military intelligence will be increased by one level. If someone comes, you won't be captured! Eunuch: Your Majesty, he looks treacherous and may have accomplices. Rong Chen sent Meow Meow, also known as Meow, to be tortured in "The Heaven-Defying Phoenix Concubine: Your Majesty, Don't Try to Run". I think he will definitely confess!

In the writing test stage, some parts of the writing may be very bad, so feel free to comment.

The best sword in the world is Yi Rong, the second is Ling Su? No third to eighth? Then the ninth cold mountain, the tenth day, and the ninety-ninth black iron. There is still nothing in between, it's too fake and empty.