The Abandoned Legitimate Daughter

It's very beautiful, the heroine and the hero really match each other well, everything else is fine, but there are some typos

Seeing the first half, I really feel like I want to abandon the article at any time. The interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is pitiful, and they actually fall in love for no reason. The plot of the article is confusing many times.

At more than 170 chapters, it was said at the beginning that the saint told the heroine that she was going to the palace to steal the unicorn horn. In the following chapters, it was said that the saint did not tell the heroine exactly what she wanted to steal, which was confusing.

I'm a bit confused about the titles, are they cousins ​​or cousins?

Does this author not understand the titles of family members? How do you call your uncle's children cousins? If you can't understand this simple relationship, how can you write thrilling, twists and turns and bizarre content?

I feel like the male protagonist is stupid and scumbag, the female protagonist is a love-brainer, and the supporting characters are all just like everyone else, and I feel like they have no brains.

What the hell are you writing? I think the words Lin Gang scolded at the beginning were a bit silly and don't make any sense.

There are too many men, two, three, four and five.

How can they be cousins?

I have been reading novels for ten years, but I can't understand what this book is like. Novels, novels, and ancient collections are all made up of wild and unconstrained structures. Compared with other space novels, they are not enough to read. This kind of subject matter is more suitable for modern writing than ancient prose.