The Chargers in the Apocalypse Are Absolutely Disgusting

On August 19, 2017, China's FAST radio telescope in Guizhou received a suspicious signal from 4 light-years away in outer space. Also on August 19, 2017, Stephen Hawking solemnly warned China: "Do not answer! Do not answer! Do not answer!" On September 1, 2017, after careful consideration and analysis of all possibilities of contact with extraterrestrial civilizations, the Chinese government decided not to let this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity pass, believing that if China did not answer, other countries would, and pointing out that this exchange might trigger a great leap forward in science and technology for all humankind, China decided to answer. On May 6, 2018, Chinese scientists announced...

The protagonist's personality is far too weak. Honestly, if I were the male lead, I would definitely treat the female lead like a sex slave, and any affection I have would be purely based on looks. Also, isn't the female lead a bit too overbearing? Normally, if someone needs protection, shouldn't they be cautiously watching their expression? But the female lead does nothing and even directly uses the male lead's money to have him bring her all sorts of meaningless things, like game consoles? She's transmigrated to a dangerous world she knows nothing about, and instead of trying to improve her knowledge of this world or learning that she might have superpowers, she doesn't ask others how to develop them...

(Spoilers ahead, proceed with caution if you haven't read up to Chapter 33 of Volume 2) It's quite enjoyable to read, but there are still many underlying issues. To encourage the author, I'll give it a 10/10 (·ω< )★ This novel is a sweet, pure love story disguised as a post-apocalyptic tale. Don't judge it by strict post-apocalyptic standards. If viewed through the lens of a realistically harsh post-apocalyptic lens, given the female lead's weak and submissive personality and other problems, this book would undoubtedly be considered terrible. You can see this from the review of the person below me. After reading all the chapters, this is my assessment of the author's skill...

There are many stories about transformation, but very few about marriage transformation. Good stories about marriage transformation are even rarer. Currently, this story ranks second among those I've read, but I'm not giving it first place mainly because the first place is longer. Furthermore, the apocalypse is a rare genre, so I hope the author writes the setting carefully, preferably with meticulous attention to detail. I've read many apocalyptic stories with inconsistent settings, which I find unbearable; they completely shatter my worldview. However, this story is currently quite good, so I hope it doesn't fall apart. A simpler, less complex setting is acceptable, but a lot of confusing settings is unacceptable. Often, I end up completely confused, having to go back and refer to previous stories, and the author is prone to making mistakes. Regarding superpowers, I hope there aren't any world-destroying abilities; that's too...

First, let's introduce a concept: an apocalyptic outbreak can be divided into three phases: the initial outbreak (basically, if the zombie infection rate reaches 90%, humanity will face a zombie army at least twice its size in the initial outbreak, and the onset of the disease will be delayed depending on the individual's health, resulting in various unpredictable and intermittent sudden zombie transformations, which will lead to various human weaknesses and conflicts), the transition phase (after the initial outbreak, some humans have established numerous strongholds, and the number of infected people has almost disappeared, but they will face a massive horde of zombies to sweep through, at which point the best aspects of humanity will be tested), and the stable phase (after...).

The protagonist's psychological transformation from a man to a girl felt too rushed; the male psyche wasn't emphasized enough, making her seem like a very natural girl from the start. Also, the power evolution was a bit too fast—three powers after just a few kisses. It'll probably become an invincible story... Hopefully, this will be addressed in future writing. Finally, the Lurker evolved after being bombed by missiles. However, the Lurker didn't have any contact with Lin Xiao at this point. Although it doesn't seem to relate to the content, why is Lin Xiao's Lurker smaller than normal? (*￣M￣) Lin Xiao: I want to know too! (ﾉ○ Д ○)ﾉ

TL; DR version: 1. The reviews from the readers are more interesting than the book itself. 2. The fanservice is on point. 3. The plot is fragmented. 4. I can't like the characters, I even hate them. 5. The world-building is terrible. I'm currently on [VIP] chapter 76. To be honest, so far, the only things keeping me reading are the interesting reviews from the readers and the yellow plot. But I suddenly realized I'm reading a post-apocalyptic novel! If I were just reading reviews, I could have easily found a silly novel! However, I've finally witnessed a true case of reviews being more interesting than the novel itself. Regarding the yellow plot, I also want to say...

She goes out to find the male protagonist and gets kidnapped. After escaping with her companions, she's kidnapped again. The male protagonist rescues her, then goes out again and gets kidnapped once more, only to be rescued again. That concludes the first volume. The second volume begins with her being kidnapped again. It seems she's either being kidnapped or on her way to being kidnapped. They say things don't happen more than three times, but by the beginning of the second volume, she's been kidnapped at least four times. It's clear the author has run out of material; it's just a matter of kidnapping, rescuing her, having a brief moment of romance with the male protagonist, and then waiting to be kidnapped again. I estimate that after four or five more kidnappings, it will end. That's about it for the book.

I fattened it up before checking on it, and it died.

Post-apocalyptic marriage is arguably an extremely difficult genre to write well. It requires capturing both the despair of the apocalypse and the bittersweetness of a marriage based on love. The fusion of these two elements cannot be too bland, nor too fantastical. A slight element of evolution can be incorporated into the post-apocalyptic setting. The male lead shouldn't know about the female lead's transformation too early. He can be slightly stronger, but not mindlessly so. The female lead (after transformation) can be very beautiful, but doesn't need to be stunningly gorgeous. The author will need to put a lot of effort into developing the personalities of the other two main characters. (This is just my personal opinion; I would be very happy if it helps the author, and I wish the author great success with this book.)