Transmigrating with a Dungeon Fighter Transformation System

Transformation is a relatively niche concept, with all sorts of bizarre and varied tropes. I came here because I was used to the same old formulas on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform). To be honest, the authors here generally have much more imaginative ideas. The beginning of this author's *Poisonous Milk Powder* was alright, but once it officially entered the world of Sword Art Online, countless flaws began to appear. First, in the restaurant, Asuna asks the protagonist if he's in pain. The author's description of the protagonist feeling pain just from listening to the game animation is really bad. The excuse of feeling pain is too lame; the protagonist could have simply ignored it, since this body isn't his own. In fact, the author's forced emotional manipulation is really bad...

A fairly interesting novel. It's a lighthearted and cheerful slice-of-life novel. It's a story set in a time-travel world. The protagonist is resurrected through the traditional tale of death, and also gender-swapped. The protagonist is transported to different anime worlds, experiencing daily life interacting with the characters. Currently, it only covers the Sword Art Online world. If I write about different worlds later, I hope to include more slice-of-life scenes to see if there are any details I can add.

In the beginning of time, the Tao gave birth to One, One gave birth to Two, Two gave birth to Three, Three gave birth to all things, All things gave birth to Taiji, Taiji gave birth to Second Aunt, Second Aunt gave birth to Fourth Uncle, Fourth Uncle gave birth to Eighth Child, Eighth Child wanted to drink milk, drank this milk, forgot about this child, and thus Want Want Milk was born.

Disadvantages: 1. Too many typos. 2. Characters' intelligence is zero in some aspects. Examples: 1. The creator of SAO has skills he didn't set up appearing in his own game and thinks it's perfectly normal, but ZZ doesn't explain it, such as the brainwashing of the main god. 2. Small-time thugs are brainless and don't fear superpowers in the real world. 3. Slightly exaggerated hand-to-hand combat. 4. Some fight scenes are awkward. Advantages: 1. ZZ's writing style is improving, especially in the fight scenes, so the later plot is worth looking forward to. 2. EMMMMMMMM... I can't think of anything else.

Can I ask what kind of game this "poisonous milk powder" is?

The addition of the younger sister character after Naruto really makes me want to quit.

That person admitted to plagiarism, but didn't change much... In short, it's up to the author to decide what to do. As an outsider, I won't say much. I came here mainly because the comments there disgusted me. They were spouting childish nonsense like "What business is it of yours if someone plagiarizes?" I don't expect to be able to communicate with them. Suggestions: The author's writing needs improvement, and the villain's intelligence should be raised a little bit. Finally, the dialogue is a bit awkward... I don't know if it's just my perspective.

The book is good, but my sister's writing is the biggest flaw; it's really upsetting.

One of my least favorite sayings is "All good things must come to an end."

A younger sister suddenly appears out of nowhere, without any build-up. Why add a character like that? And her introduction is so abrupt, completely out of the blue. It's so jarring, and this stiff entrance really ruins the reading experience. So far, I have absolutely no liking for this character.