The Retired Pro Gamer Is a High School Girl's Kept Man

Commentator: A Cong Title: A Guide to Becoming a Slice-of-Life Author Summary: Slice-of-Life Stories Need More Design Suitable Reading Scope: Authors who write slice-of-life stories in a bland, uneventful way Word Count: 2220 Reading Time: Approximately 4 minutes I haven't reviewed a novel with such a well-developed plot in a long time, so this novel gave me a very good reading experience. The writing is smooth, the plot is relatively coherent, and it avoids most of the common mistakes made by beginners, which made me quite happy. However, while I was happy, a friendly reading experience doesn't necessarily mean this book was particularly interesting; on the contrary, that's what surprised me...

(First book review, please forgive any shortcomings) Esports is a common theme in novels; the protagonist usually has incredible skills, but fails to win a championship for some reason, then retires and makes a triumphant return – this formula is pretty much set. But the protagonist in this book is different. He doesn't have incredible skills, and his tactical awareness isn't particularly strong. He always falls short at the last hurdle and ultimately chooses to retire due to reality. Reading this, I felt the cruelty of reality, the unbridgeable gap no matter how hard one tries. Later, a fan of the protagonist suddenly appears, which is a highlight of the book – rich, beautiful, and a loyal fan of the male lead, a very perfect character...

This... This is the game that doesn't require eyesight...

StarCraft is only a niche game in the country, right...?

Starting today, I'm the Dragon King! Policeman: Starting today, you're going to jail! Me: That's not fair! There's a pervert here too! Policeman: You, a lolicon, have the nerve to call others perverts! Behave yourself, the police station provides food and soap! Me: Aaaaaah! 😱

Why does it feel like Qidian novels...

I'm currently halfway through reading and wanted to write a review. Up to this point, the main characters and plot are largely established. The female lead's character isn't quite clear yet, but I've summarized it briefly: 1. She's beautiful; 2. She has a peculiar obsession with what she wants to do. The author specifically mentions that the male lead handles things according to his own unique principles (this is particularly well-developed in him), which is very similar to the female lead. However, while reading, I didn't find this similarity between the female lead and the male lead. It's merely her discrimination against those she perceives as frivolous, which doesn't seem strange. If the author...

The descriptions are insufficient; many scenes lack sufficient development, often leaving the reader confused. The same applies to dialogue; there's a lack of clear dialogue, making it instantly disorganized when there's a lot of dialogue.

After reading this novel, I, an 11-year FPS player, started practicing StarCraft.

Kill Huang Xudong, the Colossus can attack the air.