The Empress's Training Record

This isn't my first time writing a review for this book; my previous reviews were all deleted, which was really frustrating. If you think my review is bad, feel free to find me and we can argue. First of all, the title, "The Training Record of the Lolita Queen," is what attracted me. Although lolita queens are a common theme in various novels and have even become a reason for unity in some countries, the combination of "training" and "queen"—two seemingly unrelated words—is very appealing, especially to those with a penchant for lolita. The synopsis uses a reference to Jackie Chan's "Overlord Shampoo," and while it seems lighthearted, it actually contains some of the main plot points. Chapters one through seven effectively explain the character of Salota as a lolita...

Hi, this is Luanma, the author of "I Became a Girl," here to write a review of "The Domination Record of the Lolita Queen." First of all, overall, this light novel perfectly meets the reading needs of today's readers and is a must-read for those with a love for lolis. I quickly read the first few chapters, and may have missed some points, so I'll just pick out the ones that impressed me most. First, I felt that the author, Lu Gongzi, was using dialogue to pad the word count. Second, the line breaks in each chapter are too severe; you basically have to jump to the next line after every sentence, which detracts from the reading experience. So I quickly glanced at the later chapters, and sure enough, the line breaks were...

I only read the prologue and the ending. The prologue reads "Good morning, Sharota," and the ending reads "Good night, Uncle Katz."

This is my first book review, so please be kind. Personally, I think this is a near-perfect book. It's no exaggeration to say that the author, with his somewhat immature writing style and simple, easy-to-understand ideas, has created a nearly perfect book. Although the book has some flaws, those flaws are insignificant compared to the overall quality. Although it's only been submitted for a short time, it has already shown considerable popularity. Of course, this is partly due to the author's cross-dressing masturbation incident. Let's talk about the plot. The beginning has some issues; the coup comes too suddenly. Although the reasons are explained later, the first reaction is definitely one of surprise. Then...

I didn't want to read the rest after reading the second chapter.

Reviewer 1: The story deviates significantly from reader expectations. The political content is written too hard. Rather than focusing on the young empress, the protagonist seems more concerned with political construction. Character development is decent in the early stages, but becomes diluted by the later plot, lacking charm. Reviewer 2: This is a Western fantasy work with a strong appealing premise, smooth writing, and excellent character development. Its weakness lies in its conventional plot. The overly high starting point makes story progression somewhat difficult, largely relying on constantly introducing new characters to introduce the story, although it still maintains...

Looking at the screen, I'd just finished reading chapter 138. I couldn't help but recall this line: "A true hero dares to face the bleakness of life, dares to confront the dripping blood. What a lamenter and what a fortunate one..." (That's the original quote, right?) It's been a long time since I left my student days. After reading this novel, for some reason, the girlish heart that belongs to this tomboy of mine has begun to awaken. Oh, Nie Zheng Wang! Author, could you update any faster? Could you update any faster? Faster? I want to see the Shura field of the Empress, the Queen, and the others!

I feel like the author ran out of inspiration later on.

The plot is very simple, but it is precisely in this simplicity that it reveals a healing power.

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