How This Good-for-Nothing Rose to Become a King

The following book reviews are from a reader's personal perspective: 1. First, the title and synopsis directly point out the main plot, which is good. 2. Each chapter is relatively short (around 1000 words), making it a bit unsatisfying to read. 3. The title of the first volume, "The Useless Younger Brother and the Invincible Older Sister," is somewhat inappropriate, as the older sister (Lin Ling) is not invincible. 4. My main focus is on the male protagonist's character design: Lin Ye's poor magical talent reminds me of The Knight of the Failed Examination, but unlike the protagonist of The Knight of the Failed Examination, Lin Ye is portrayed as a "useless" character. Although he has suffered many injustices, he has his older sister's love, and his living environment is relatively stable. His...

Well… I started reading this novel when the author first began writing it (to be honest, from chapters 6 and 7 onwards). At first, I thought it was alright, but as it progressed, some problems arose. The author is trying to improve this, though. Let's look at what the problems are. 1. Roughness in writing style: This does improve a little as it goes on, but it's still not a complete improvement. In the side story of the second volume, "The Legend of Ling Wu" (I think, maybe I'm wrong about the name), there's a very short environmental description… which made me exclaim "Wow!" Forgive my bluntness, but this short passage reminded me of two years ago…

This is my first time writing a book review, so I'll keep it to myself and give it a reluctant 8 out of 10 to encourage myself! First, the beginning. At that time, I never thought my work would be published, so I lacked confidence and wasn't very good at writing. Therefore, the beginning was arguably the worst part of the entire book. But as I wrote more, I gradually learned how to write a book. Unlike the beginning, when I wrote so much plain language and my writing style was terrible, I slowly felt that my writing was readable. As for the content...

When I first read this book, I was only at level 3. Time flies; now I'm at level 9!

From the first chapter, the author's writing style is quite good, but there are still some shortcomings, such as the dialogue between the siblings! The frequent use of the word "said" at the end makes it feel a bit like colloquial writing. I suggest reading other books to see how dialogue is written! The expression of the siblings' emotions does resemble about one-fifth of an anime, and there's very little description of the surrounding scenery. (I only read the beginning, so I don't know how it is later.) Regarding writing techniques, the author uses a second-person narrative, with a touch of first-person narration. (I think this method is used well!) ...

If the author's new book gets 1000 monthly votes in August, the author will cross-dress. Please pass this message on, brothers!

Conquering the entire harem

The old group has been shut down for some reason, and I'm really sorry about that. So I've created a new group. The group chat number is 523141333. There are relatively few members, and it will be used for the new book. Everyone who joins is like a brother or sister, and it's very friendly.

I, innocent and pure, am surrounded by infatuated women. My new book needs your support; you definitely won't be disappointed.

Keep it up! First, try reading Chinese novels. Then check out light novels... Some differences are too great. The author is probably well aware of their shortcomings... I don't have much to say... It's just that anime and novels are not the same art form. It's too much like anime... And... The basic structure of the novel isn't just bad, it's terrible... Newbies... Are basically all like this... Still lacking experience... (Me too). So I'll summarize my thoughts. If the author disagrees, just pretend I didn't say anything ^_^. After all, I'm just a reader too. Just posting occasionally. 😆...