After Turning into a Catgirl Maid, the Heroine Is Actually Me?

Come on

Hmm~ how to put it, many transitions felt abrupt, for example, the part where Bai Li transforms into Feng Yi's company—no reason was given, and Feng Yi's identity wasn't explained beforehand. Also, in a story about a woman who marries into another man, Feng Yi's storyline is too much. It easily feels like a story about a woman becoming a lesbian. A few revisions would probably fix it. Regarding the reason section, adding more of Bai Li's inner thoughts beforehand, such as thinking about how to gain favor with the opposite sex before taking action.

The plot transitions at the beginning, from searching for the job applicants to running around together, felt a bit strange.

This book chose to rewrite the entire plot of the second book. Although I didn't know that he was reminding me that the book would be banned if it wasn't revised, I can still see my book. I will summarize all the experiences gained from this book and use them to create my second book, "Farewell to This Book."

Marriage